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Building Blocks of Language IV

Objective

Now let’s turn our attention to some of the necessary skills in creating a clear, informative, and interesting text.

Previously Covered

  • In the previous section, we looked at some of the basic elements of language acquisition, including semantics, syntax, and morphology. We also reviewed some methods and techniques to help students acquire a deeper understanding of the language.

Care and Handling of the Spoken Word

Receiving a message orally—whether it’s a presentation, speech, or radio ad—is quite a different process than reading. Because the speaker can employ body language, inflection, volume, and other elements, they can shape the message in a host of different ways. Here are some things to look for when listening:

Dialect: Is it apparent that the speaker is from a certain place? How is this affecting your reception of the message—many stereotypes crop up when speakers employ dialect. Point of view: Is the speaker coming at the issue from a particular angle, or are they simply reporting or telling something? Main idea vs Digression: Know what the speaker’s point is and when they are straying from it. This will help you clarify and understand their argument or statement. Of course, there are many more considerations when analyzing a spoken text. Be aware that the denotative words are always working in conjunction with connotative signals like the ones mentioned above.

When speaking yourself, you should also be conscious of these factors and how your audience is receiving them. Be clear, concise, stay on topic, and choose language that is appropriate for your audience and setting.

Back to the Page

Now, let’s turn our attention back to the art of creating a good, solid piece of writing. We’ll review some of the basics of the process step-by-step. First, let’s look at what happens even before the pen hits the page.

The Writing Process

“Writing is a fluid process created by writers as they work. Accomplished writers move back and forth between the stages of the process, both consciously and unconsciously. Young writers, however, benefit from the structure and security of following the writing process in their writing.”

– Stages of the Writing Process by Gardner and Johnson (1997)

Many students find writing to be a daunting task. They are easily overwhelmed by the most rudimentary of writing assignments and need you, their teacher, to provide steady guidance. As quoted above, students require the structure and security of a regimented process to help them get started. By teaching the following foundational elements of the writing process, you will give your students the tools they need to tackle whatever writing assignment they are given with confidence.

Prewriting

By bracketing out concern for anything other than generating ideas, good prewriting facilitates creativity and lateral thinking. Even though the process is designed to elicit free-flowing ideas, it’s important that prewriting have some structure. Otherwise, it can degenerate into unfocused daydreaming.

The best way to give structure to the prewriting process is to take notes on the ideas that are being generated. The following are some note-taking methods specific to the prewriting process that highlight the relationships between ideas and increase the likelihood of producing useful material.

Brainstorming

Brainstorming is the process of generating ideas and information based on word associations. Brainstorming involves generating a list of words, phrases, names, and anything else that comes to a writer’s mind when he or she thinks about the topic at hand. Some students may balk at having to brainstorm, but it’s critical that you reinforce the idea that this is an important part of the writing process and one that will make the actual writing that much easier.

During brainstorming, writers don’t need to worry about the utility of the items on their lists. Brainstormed lists serve as raw material for the writing process; the main goal is to think of as many ideas as possible. After brainstorming a list, it’s helpful to go back through the list and try to group similar items together. After grouping the items, try to create a label for each group.

For example, if students are assigned a paper on a famous person, some brainstorming topics might include:

  • Name of the person
  • When they were born
  • Major events in their life
  • What made them famous
  • When did they live and/or die
  • How did they change society

Free-Writing

Free-writing is an unstructured, associative form of writing that closely mirrors the process of brainstorming. The idea behind free-writing is to designate a period of time—say ten minutes—during which you won’t stop writing, even forcing yourself to continue when you feel like you have no ideas.

Like brainstorming, free-writing allows a writer to focus on generating ideas without worrying about style and grammar. There’s no need to censor ideas; the goal is to write whatever you’re thinking and sort it out later.

Once the designated period of time has elapsed, the writer can choose to read through the free-writing, select one or two of the best ideas and then free-write again on those specific topics. This process is called looping. Several rounds of looping can help writers narrow down their thinking to a usable thesis.

Clustering

Clustering explores the relationship between ideas by creating a map of concepts and their relationships to one another. Physically rendering the relationships between topics and ideas helps clarify thinking as well as reveal new directions for inquiry.

For instance, the beginning of a cluster map for a paper on Martin Luther King Jr.’s “Letter from the Birmingham Jail” might look something like this:

Cluster map for 'Letter from the Birmingham Jail'
If you already know what your main topic or thesis is, you can put it in the circle that’s at the center of your cluster map and work outwards. If you don’t yet know your thesis, you can use the cluster map to get a sense of which topics are most important (Which circles have the most lines drawn to them?)

Each group of connected circles represents a larger topic that can become a paragraph in an essay or paper. Circles in a cluster map also can include questions that arise during the course of creating the map.

Remember that:

  • Prewriting is the generation of ideas preliminary to formal writing.
  • Brainstorming is the process of generating ideas and information based on word associations.
  • Free-writing is an unstructured, associative form of writing that closely mirrors the process of brainstorming.
  • Looping is the process of performing several rounds of free-writing on increasingly narrow topics.
  • Clustering explores the relationship between ideas by creating a physical “map” of concepts and their relationships to one another.

Rough Draft

After pre-writing comes the rough draft, the second stage of the writing process. This is the point at which the writer shapes his or her thoughts about the paper’s topic into sentences and paragraphs. At this point, it isn’t necessary to worry about correct grammar or spelling, or whether the paper is organized appropriately. The rough draft is the messy copy that gets the writer writing.

Creating a rough draft is a writer-centered activity, meaning that this is when the writer sharpens his or her thoughts about the content of the paper and finally decides what he or she wants to say in it.

Revising

During the revising, or third stage of writing, the student writer goes back over the rough draft and basically cleans up what has been written. During this stage, any spelling and/or grammar mistakes are corrected, ideas are organized so that they are cohesive and coherent, and sentences are refined so that they are as concise and accurate as possible. It is helpful for a writer to read their work aloud at this point, as a way of checking to see how the sentences and paragraphs flow.

Revising is a reader-centered activity in that the writer is now thinking about how the paper will be perceived by the reader. At this point, the writer should be asking him or herself questions like, “Will the reader need to know X before Y?,” or “Do my supporting points effectively convey the argument I’m trying to make?” These questions will help the writer to clarify the connections he or she has made between ideas and concepts.

Peer Revising

After students revise their own writing, have them trade papers with each other so that they might revise each other’s work. Peer revising is very helpful to both the reader and the writer as they can learn from each other’s successes and mistakes. During this stage, they share their thoughts about what they have read and make suggestions for improvement.

Editing

The editing stage comes next. This is the point at which the writer does a final spell check, makes certain that grammar mistakes have been corrected, that any feedback from the peer revising exercise has been implemented, and that the paper is free of content errors.

Final Draft

After pre-writing, creating a rough draft, revising, and editing, the student has finally reached the final and most important stage: producing a final draft. This is the very neat, well-written and grammatically correct draft that the student submits to you, the teacher, for feedback.

“In actuality, the writing process is not a highly organized linear process, but rather a continual movement between the different steps of the writing model.”

Stages of the Writing Process by Gardner and Johnson (1997)

Review of the Steps in the Writing Process

  • Pre-Writing
  • Rough Draft
  • Revising
  • Peer Revising
  • Editing
  • Final Draft

Developing Writing Skills

There are a number of ways for teachers to help their students develop good writing skills. Encouraging students to start writing as soon as they can is the first and most primary method.

Building Foundations

For a child to write meaningfully and with pride, he or she must first hone their fine motor skills. Activities that encourage growth in this area include:

  • art projects
  • working with clay
  • measuring and pouring different liquids
  • practicing writing

Practicing writing includes scribbling with pencils, pens, markers, or crayons. When a child is very young and is just beginning to show an interest in writing, make paper and writing utensils available at all times. Doing so will encourage any and all efforts the child shows to write and allows the child a chance to practice their newfound interest.

When a child makes circles and other basic shapes, discuss these attempts with him or her in a positive way. Point out shapes and draw them together. Have stencils available for tracing and encourage the child to look at and talk about their work.

Reading and Writing Go Hand-in-Hand

Once a child has progressed past the rudimentary writing skills mentioned above, the push to develop his or her writing begins to include reading, too. This is because reading and writing go hand-in-hand. The ability to read is influenced by the ability to write and vice versa. By encouraging reading, the student gains a definite advantage as a writer.

Word recognition is key in developing reading skills. When teaching word recognition, try the following:

  • Pick out words that the student readily recognizes in magazines and books
  • Talk about the similarities and differences in words (bell and dell, wall and walk)

Once the student shows that he or she has a grasp of some vocabulary words, encourage that student to practice writing those words. Writing improves through practice and positive feedback. Have students write letters to family members, thank you notes, notes to or about their favorite literary characters, or even their own poems and stories.

Developing Writing Skills in Older Students

The purpose of writing is to communicate thoughts and ideas. This very fundamental concept should form the basis of any writing development activities you plan for your students. The following activities utilize this idea while encouraging an interest in creative writing:

Dialogue Journal

A dialogue journal is a notebook or journal kept by two people, usually a student and their teacher. Each party writes entries that are either related to a given topic or are responses from a designated reading. The journal is exchanged after each entry is completed.

When assigning a dialogue journal, it’s important to be creative. Adapt each activity to the learner’s needs. Emphasize to your students that reading and writing fluency is important, that spelling and handwriting are critical because writing, after all, is simply a way of communicating ideas.

The benefits of assigning a dialogue journal include:

  • Students have the opportunity to have their written questions answered by the teacher
  • The journal creates an opportunity for the student to ask questions that help clarify his or her thinking and/or stimulate ideas
  • The teacher has the opportunity to get to know the student, as well as his or her language and culture
  • The journal can be used as a record of a student’s progress

Conference Writing

Conference writing is an activity that encourages writers to discuss and share their work with an individual or group.

The steps for conference writing are short and easy to follow. First, have each student select a topic to write about. Second, discuss the selected topic with the writer. And finally, have each writer or group start off by writing a rough draft. Now, this sounds like any other kind of writing, but in this activity, the writers are encouraged to express their thoughts and ideas freely, without fear of having to follow any writing rules.

Here are some guidelines to follow when you use conference writing:

  1. Do not correct spelling errors or general surface structure details during conferencing.
  2. Create a supportive environment, not a competitive one.
  3. Resist directing changes that will take ownership away from the writer.
  4. Respond first to the message and content before moving on to any teaching points.

Here are a few other ways to vary the group:

  • Have student writers read their stories to the group instead of discussing them with the teacher.
  • Have the group members help writers discover things they may want to change.
  • Instruct each student writer to write a second draft, making the additions and corrections that were discussed in conference with their group.
  • Arrange another private or group conference with each writer.

At the end of the activity, distribute the final drafts around the group and encourage the class to read all of the newly written stories.

Guided Writing

Guided writing is an individual or group activity where students use word maps to organize their ideas before writing.

Word maps are used to show relationships between words. You begin creating a word map by writing a word in a central circle. Next, ask students to brainstorm words that are related to the first focus word. As the students come up with appropriate words, write them around the focus word and link them with lines. Related words could include:

  • Words with similar meanings
  • Words that share the same topic or theme
  • Words that express alternate meanings of the focus word

Word maps encourage writers to make connections between new words and words they already know. By mapping relationships between words, students are able to expand their vocabulary, which, in turn, assists in the development of their writing skills.

Steps to guided writing:

  • Pick a topic to write about
  • Create a word map and have the student write about the chosen topic using the words from the map
  • Encourage inventive spelling

Inventive spelling is the practice of allowing beginning readers and writers to write any way they want. This promotes the idea that the act of writing is more important than correctness of form and spelling. Eventually, the student will learn to use the correct form. Inventive spelling allows student writers to write independently before they are able to spell and encourages creative writing as a means of self-expression.

Fluency

Fluency should be one of the goals stressed at the beginning of each writing lesson. Fluency refers to the transfer of the flow of speech to the written word. A significant part of developing writing skills depends on the ability to visualize spoken words, phrases, and sentences as they are heard and write them in their entirety, as opposed to writing them syllable by syllable.

Steps to follow in a fluency writing activity:

  • Verbally express a sentence, repeating it if necessary
  • When the students have learned the sentence, have them write it without stopping

Fluency in writing guidelines:

  • Begin by speaking single words, then move on to phrases and whole sentences
  • Encourage students to write what you’ve said in its entirety without stopping to correct mistakes
  • Encourage students to write quickly, but legibly
  • Work on problem words only after a sentence has been written

Review

There are many ways to teach writing skills to students. Young writers benefit from well-developed fine motor skills, while older writers benefit from well-planned writing activities such as:

  • Keeping a dialogue journal
  • Participating in conference writing
  • Practicing guided writing
  • Exploring inventive spelling
  • Taking part in writing fluency activities

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